My heart is a clean slate
and there is none i hate
be it a disappointing date
with nothing to offer in his plate
Following the dictates of fate
and always being in a serene state
looking for a cute mate
who, through difficulties can skate
yet still never gets late
2 comments:
good poem
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Sorry meeru kavi kadu.....kaviyathri :-) well these are simple thoughts, that lie leashed in all our hearts and we always keep yearning for such a person to come into our lives. Sometimes it happens and sometimes it doesn't, thats life, lovely poem though. However you could do without the forced rhyme patterns, being a natural is good too. You could post your poem on this site www.allpoetry.com Its a free site and an excellent place to get feedback and make some good poet friends, cheers :-)
Sudarshan.
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